tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2856547151523423474.post8043821767983083434..comments2024-03-12T12:38:23.542-04:00Comments on The Kind of Face You Hate: A Story - Part Twobill r.http://www.blogger.com/profile/17748572205731857892noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2856547151523423474.post-39537585242492498202009-05-21T09:43:33.880-04:002009-05-21T09:43:33.880-04:00Bill - You've certainly got me hooked - goint to r...Bill - You've certainly got me hooked - goint to read Part 3 in a minute.Patricia Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15394997608325540950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2856547151523423474.post-85254082638287714072009-05-20T11:12:24.854-04:002009-05-20T11:12:24.854-04:00Thanks very much, Marilyn. Dialogue is very impor...Thanks very much, Marilyn. Dialogue is very important to me, and I work hard on it.<br /><br />Part 3 will go up tonight. I'm just typing from my manuscript copy, and making corrections/changes as I go.bill r.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17748572205731857892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2856547151523423474.post-34011278312612477592009-05-20T11:07:40.902-04:002009-05-20T11:07:40.902-04:00Very intriguing, Bill. Now I want to know more. Yo...Very intriguing, Bill. Now I want to know more. You handle dialogue very well. That's not easy. Is Part 3 going up later today or tomorrow?Marilynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15730000155687661753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2856547151523423474.post-47744982614838209582009-05-20T11:01:11.272-04:002009-05-20T11:01:11.272-04:00I don't know yet. I'm hoping it will fall neatly ...I don't know yet. I'm hoping it will fall neatly into five parts, and finish up on Friday, but I don't want to force it. I just try to find a natural breaking point for each day, without making it either too long or too short.bill r.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17748572205731857892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2856547151523423474.post-72886559039965330872009-05-20T10:50:17.127-04:002009-05-20T10:50:17.127-04:00Alright, well that's where I've read up to before ...Alright, well that's where I've read up to before so now I'm excited for part three. How many parts by the way?Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05730146625671701859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2856547151523423474.post-15358964979157023222009-05-20T09:40:48.435-04:002009-05-20T09:40:48.435-04:00Thank you, Ed. I was bothered by the idea that pa...Thank you, Ed. I was bothered by the idea that part one would make the story seem very one-note, however effective anyone may or may not have thought it was, so I hope part two threw enough wrinkles into things to keep people interested.bill r.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17748572205731857892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2856547151523423474.post-63624570010190032362009-05-20T09:35:14.518-04:002009-05-20T09:35:14.518-04:00This guy is one creepy dude. Nice. You've certainl...This guy is one creepy dude. Nice. You've certainly got me wondering what the hell is up with him.Ed Howardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18014222247676090467noreply@blogger.com